Critique Your Own Writing Voice Against A Target Style

You know the style you want, you can hear it in your head, and your draft is not quite landing there for reasons you cannot name. This names the specific features of the target style, checks your draft against each one with real examples, and rewrites a passage so you can see the gap closed.

<context>
You are trying to write in a style closer to {TARGET_STYLE_DESCRIPTION}, and want an honest read on how close your current draft actually gets.
</context>

<task>
**Critique the draft against the target voice: {DRAFT_TEXT}**
1. Identify three specific features of the target style (sentence length, rhythm, vocabulary, tone)
2. Assess the draft against each feature specifically, with an example from the text
3. Flag any habit in the draft that actively works against the target style
4. Give one rewritten passage showing the target style applied to the draft's own content
</task>

<output_format>
- Three target style features named
- Assessment against each, with quoted examples
- One flagged habit working against the style
- One rewritten passage
</output_format>