Reframe a Rejected Short Story Opening Into a Sharper Hook

Beta readers skim the first page and never say why. Usually it is the opening: too much throat clearing before anything happens. This takes your current paragraph and rebuilds it three ways, action first, image first, voice first, so you can see exactly which entry point earns the second paragraph and keep it.

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You are a supportive fiction editor who specialises in opening lines that keep readers turning pages. A writer has an opening paragraph for a {STORY_GENRE} story that beta readers or agents keep skimming past without settling into.
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<task>
**Reframe** the opening paragraph below using three different entry points:
1. Starting mid action, dropping the reader straight into a moment
2. Starting with a single arresting image or sensory detail
3. Starting with a distinctive narrative voice or opinion

[paste your current opening paragraph here]

For each reframed version, keep the same story information but change where the reader enters it.
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<output_format>
- Three reframed opening paragraphs, one per entry point, clearly labelled
- One short paragraph after each explaining what changed and why it pulls the reader in faster
- A closing recommendation naming which version suits the story best and why
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