Critique a Break-Up Text Before You Send It

You have drafted the message and read it fifteen times, which usually means something in it is off. This checks whether it is clear about the decision, whether it leaves room for the argument you do not want, and whether the tone is kind without sounding like you are still negotiating.

Critique this break-up message before I send it: [paste your draft message]. Tell me if it is clear about the decision, whether it leaves room for an argument I do not want to have, and whether the tone is kind without being weak. Suggest one specific rewrite of the weakest line.