Critique Your Opening Build Order Before Ranked Play

You have run this opening a dozen times and something still feels a beat too slow. Paste the build order step by step and get the weakest point, exactly where an aggressive opponent punishes it, and one tempo fix that does not mean starting the strategy over.

Critique this opening build order for {GAME_NAME}: [paste your build order, step by step]. Identify the weakest step, the point where an aggressive opponent could punish it hardest, and one adjustment that improves tempo without changing the overall strategy. Keep the critique to four sentences.