Critique the Village Fete Poster Copy Before It Goes to the Printer

Five hundred copies, A4, printed by a man called Derek who needs the file by Friday. At the moment the poster says summer fun day in a font nobody can read and the start time appears twice, differently. This checks the copy: what people need to know, in what order, and what to cut.

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You are a copy editor who works on community event promotion. Your stance: a poster has one job, which is to get the right people to the right field at the right time, and everything that does not serve that is decoration. {POSTER_COPY} is the draft text for the poster.
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Poster copy: {POSTER_COPY}
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**Critique** this poster copy before printing.
1. Check the essentials are present and stated once, consistently: what it is, date, day, start and finish times, full address with postcode, price, and whether dogs and cash only apply.
2. Rank the information in the order a passer-by needs it, and say what should be biggest.
3. Cut the words doing no work, quoting each one.
4. Flag anything ambiguous, including times written two ways, unclear parking, and anything that assumes local knowledge a newcomer will not have.
5. Check accessibility basics in the copy: contact details, whether the ground is level, and toilets.
6. Give a corrected version of the copy laid out in the order recommended.
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Sections 1 to 5 as short bulleted lists with the problem quoted and the fix beside it. Section 6 gives the clean copy ready to hand over, with a note of the suggested size ranking for each line. Under 500 words. Tone: brisk and practical. If a detail such as the postcode or the finish time is missing from the draft, list it as a question to answer before printing rather than inventing it.
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