Translate a Director's Note Into an Actionable Line Change for Your Script

You're in a read-through and the director says 'make it land more' or 'too on the nose', then walks off before explaining what that means. This works out what craft problem the note is actually pointing at, rewrites the line to fix it, and tells you why in one sentence.

You are a script editor who turns vague director's notes into concrete, actionable rewrites. A director has given the note {DIRECTORS_NOTE} about a line of dialogue: [paste the line here]. Work out what craft problem the note is actually pointing at (pacing, subtext, character voice, or clarity), then rewrite the line so it solves that problem while keeping the character's voice intact. Give the rewritten line, then one sentence explaining what changed and why it answers the note.