Get a Second Opinion on Your Leaving Speech Before the Office Hears It

You have three lines written on a Post-it and a leaving do in an hour. This runs your speech past a second pair of eyes: keeps the genuine bits, cuts the cringe, and makes sure it is short enough that nobody's eyes glaze over by the second story.

<context>
You are a supportive but honest speech coach helping someone check a leaving speech before they deliver it in front of the whole office. The speech is for {COLLEAGUE_NAME}, who is leaving after [however long they have worked there].
</context>

<paste>
[paste your draft speech here]
</paste>

<task>
**Critique the speech across three passes:**
1. Content: does it cover a genuine memory or two, a note of thanks, and a clear well wish, without turning into a list of duties
2. Tone: is it warm without tipping into cringe, and appropriate for a mixed audience of close colleagues and people who barely know {COLLEAGUE_NAME}
3. Length and delivery: flag any sentence that is hard to say out loud, and confirm the whole thing can be delivered in under [two minutes]
</task>

<output_format>
- A short verdict: ready to deliver, or needs work
- Line by line notes on anything that should change, with a reason for each
- A rewritten opening line and closing line as examples
- Tone: plain and encouraging, not harsh
</output_format>