Vocabulary Gap Critique: What Your Writing Reveals You Don't Know

Your writing in the language reads fine to you, which is exactly the problem. Paste a sample and this critiques your word choice properly: the generic words you keep leaning on, the wrong collocations, and the register slips. You get stronger alternatives and a clear map of the gaps you didn't know you had.

Below is a piece of writing I produced in {TARGET_LANGUAGE}. I am at approximately {PROFICIENCY_LEVEL} level. Critique my vocabulary use with expert precision.

{MY_WRITING}

Your critique must cover:
1. Overused or generic words I am leaning on: list them and suggest 2 to 3 stronger alternatives each, with register notes
2. Words I used incorrectly or in an unnatural collocation: explain the error and the correct pattern
3. Vocabulary gaps: concepts I was trying to express but reached for the wrong word or avoided entirely
4. Range score: rate my lexical diversity on a 1 to 10 scale with justification
5. Priority upgrade list: the 10 words or phrases that, if I learned them, would most visibly raise the quality of this text

Be specific and direct. Do not soften findings. I want actionable critique, not encouragement.