Critique My Freelance Quote Before I Send It

You have written a quote and something feels not quite right. Paste it in with your industry, and it reviews against the things that bite later: is the scope unambiguous, is out-of-scope defined, does the fee feel justified, are the payment terms fair, and is there legal exposure hiding in the wording. Fix it before the client reads it, not after.

I've written a quote to send to a prospective client. Please critique it before I hit send.

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Review it against these dimensions:
1. Clarity: is the scope of work unambiguous?
2. Scope creep protection: does it define what's out of scope?
3. Pricing confidence: does the fee feel justified or under-explained?
4. Payment terms: are they fair and standard for {industry}?
5. Legal exposure: are there any obvious gaps that could cause disputes?
6. Professionalism: tone, formatting, spelling

Give me a score out of 10 for each dimension, a one-sentence verdict, and a prioritised list of changes to make before sending.