Critique My Character's Speech Patterns for Distinctiveness

You think your characters sound different; you need someone to check. Give dialogue samples from several characters and each gets a distinctiveness rating, the specific words and rhythms that work, any line that could swap to another character unnoticed, and one concrete fix. For writers who suspect their voices are bleeding together but cannot prove it.

Below are dialogue samples from {NUMBER} characters in my {GENRE} story. I want to know whether each character's voice is genuinely distinct or whether they bleed together.

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For each character: rate their distinctiveness (1-5), identify the specific words, rhythms, or habits that are working, flag any lines that could belong to a different character without changing meaning, and suggest one concrete adjustment per character that would sharpen their voice. Focus on patterns, not surface-level word choices. Do not suggest accents, verbal tics, or catchphrases as primary solutions.