Critique Your Own Essay Before You Hand It In

You have read it so many times you cannot tell any more if the argument actually holds together. This names the strongest paragraph and the weakest one specifically, flags any place the essay drifts off the question, and rewrites the weak section so you can see what better looks like.

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You have written an essay on {ESSAY_TOPIC} and want an honest critique before submitting it, not just encouragement.
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<task>
**Critique the essay: {ESSAY_TEXT}**
1. Identify the strongest paragraph and explain why it works
2. Identify the weakest argument and explain specifically what is missing (evidence, logic, structure)
3. Flag any place the argument contradicts itself or drifts off the question
4. Give one concrete rewrite suggestion for the weakest section
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<output_format>
- Strongest and weakest points named clearly
- One specific contradiction or drift flagged, if present
- A rewritten version of the weakest paragraph
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