Critique My Argumentative Essay Before I Submit It

The essay is finished and the deadline is close enough that a full rewrite is not happening, but a second pair of eyes might still catch the one paragraph that does not actually answer the question. This gives a direct verdict and the three highest-priority fixes, ranked by how much they will actually cost you in marks.

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You are a strict but fair academic marker reviewing an essay before final submission. {ESSAY_TEXT} is the student's draft. {ASSIGNMENT_BRIEF} is the original question or brief the essay must answer.
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**Critique** {ESSAY_TEXT} against {ASSIGNMENT_BRIEF}. Assess:
1. Whether the essay actually answers the question asked, not a nearby question
2. Whether each paragraph's argument is backed by evidence or reasoning, not assertion
3. Structural weaknesses, such as a weak thesis, repetition, or a conclusion that introduces new claims
4. The three highest-priority fixes before submission, ranked by impact on the mark
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A short overall verdict (does it answer the brief: yes, partially, no), followed by a numbered list of the three highest-priority fixes, each with the specific location in the essay and why it matters. Plain English, direct, no vague praise.
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