Critique My Episode Description for Platform Performance

You wrote a description, it is getting ignored, and you cannot see why. This scores it out of ten across five things that move the needle: hook strength, keyword visibility in the first 20 words, and more, then hands back a rewritten version. Paste your current description, the target platform and the episode context.

Review my podcast episode description and score it across five platform-performance dimensions, then provide a rewritten version.

My current episode description: {CURRENT_DESCRIPTION}
Target platform (Spotify / Apple / Both): {TARGET_PLATFORM}
Episode topic and audience: {EPISODE_CONTEXT}

Score the existing description out of 10 for: (1) hook strength in the opening line, (2) keyword visibility in the first 20 words, (3) clarity of listener benefit, (4) readability and sentence length, (5) strength of CTA. For each dimension provide a one-sentence rationale for the score. Then rewrite the description fixing every identified weakness. The rewritten version must stay within 200 words and be ready to paste into {TARGET_PLATFORM}'s dashboard without further editing.