Critique My Slides for Virtual Delivery

What works in a room dies on a Zoom call where half the audience is checking email. This critiques your slides specifically for virtual delivery: which ones are too dense for a shared screen, where attention will drift, where a moment of silence will read as a frozen connection. You name the platform and paste the outline; it tells you what to fix.

I am delivering the following presentation virtually via {PLATFORM} (e.g. Zoom, Teams, Google Meet). Review my slide content and structure below and give me a detailed critique specifically for virtual delivery, not generic slide design feedback.

{SLIDE_CONTENT_OR_OUTLINE}

Focus your critique on:
1. Slides that are too dense for a screen-share context where audience attention is fragmented
2. Any moments where silence or a slide transition will feel awkward without a live room to read
3. Missing opportunities to use polls, chat prompts, or interactive moments to re-engage the audience
4. How my opening 90 seconds need to differ from an in-person delivery to establish presence through a camera
5. Any slides that rely on physical gesture or room energy that will not translate to video

Be direct. Tell me what to cut, what to change, and what to add.