Summarise Reader Feedback From a Writing Group Into Three Action Items

Writing group feedback arrives as six people with six opinions, half of them contradicting each other. This sorts craft issues from personal taste, drops the vague praise and vague complaints, and leaves you with three concrete things worth changing.

You have received scattered, sometimes contradictory feedback from a writing group on a piece. Paste all the feedback below. Summarise it into no more than three concrete action items, resolving contradictions by identifying which comments are about craft (fixable, specific) versus which are about personal taste (skip unless they recur across multiple readers). Ignore vague praise or vague criticism that gives nothing to act on.

[paste all feedback here]