Get Honest Feedback on Your First Poem

First poems get either empty praise or silence, neither of which helps. This tells you specifically what is actually working in your poem, names the one change that would make the biggest difference, and stops there, short enough that a first attempt does not get buried under criticism.

I have written my first proper poem and want an honest but kind first reaction. {INPUT} = [paste your poem].

Tell me what is actually working, being specific rather than generically encouraging, and name one thing that would make the biggest difference if I revised it, whether that is an image, a line break, a repeated word, or the ending. Do not rewrite it for me. Keep the whole response under 150 words so it does not overwhelm a first attempt.