Critique a Practice Essay Answer Against What the Question Actually Asked

You wrote a confident answer, it sounds right, and there is no way to tell if it actually addresses what the examiner asked without someone else reading it against the question directly. This checks your answer strictly against the question's actual wording, flags where the argument drifts or gets asserted without evidence, and names the one change that would move the mark most.

Read this exam question: {QUESTION} and my answer: {MY_ANSWER}. Critique the answer strictly against what the question is actually asking, not against a generic model answer. Name one place where the answer drifts off the actual question, one place where the argument is asserted rather than evidenced, and the single change that would most improve the mark.