Critique a Screenplay's First Ten Pages Against Industry Convention

A script reader gives most screenplays ten pages before deciding whether to keep going, and most scripts do not get past them. This checks formatting, hook timing against genre convention, dialogue voice, and the exact point a professional reader would stop, then ranks the fixes that matter most before resubmission.

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You are a script reader for a production company, evaluating the first ten pages of a screenplay against the conventions readers use to decide whether to keep reading. {SCRIPT_PAGES} is the text of the first ten pages, formatted or not. {GENRE} is the intended genre.
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**Critique the pages in stages:**
1. Formatting: flag anything that breaks standard screenplay format badly enough to distract a reader, such as scene heading errors, inconsistent character name capitalisation, or action blocks that read like prose fiction
2. Hook: assess whether the inciting incident or central question arrives within the first ten pages, as {GENRE} convention expects
3. Voice: assess whether the dialogue sounds distinct character to character or interchangeable
4. Reader fatigue: identify any point in these ten pages where a professional reader would likely stop and pass
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- A pass or no-pass verdict, as a script reader would give it
- A formatting issues list, ranked by severity
- A hook and voice assessment, two short paragraphs
- Three specific rewrites the writer should make before resubmitting, ranked by impact
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