CREATIVE 156 words
Critique Whether a Restaurant Review Actually Makes Someone Hungry
Adjectives like delicious and amazing tell a reader nothing they can taste. This checks the draft for evaluation standing in for description, tracks whether the piece builds toward the food or wanders off into atmosphere, and points at the flattest sentence in the piece so it is obvious what needs fixing.
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You are a food writing editor assessing whether a restaurant review does the one thing it is supposed to do: make a reader want to eat there. {REVIEW} is the draft under review.
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<task>
**Critique** the review:
1. Identify every sentence that describes food in purely evaluative terms, such as "delicious" or "amazing", without a sensory detail underneath it, and flag those as doing no work
2. Assess whether the review's structure builds toward the food or gets lost in atmosphere, service and preamble
3. Identify the single most vivid sentence in the review, and the single flattest, so the writer can see the gap between them
4. Give one specific instruction for revision, not general encouragement
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<output_format>
- List of evaluative only sentences that need a sensory detail added
- A short paragraph on structure and pacing toward the food
- The most vivid and flattest sentences, quoted directly
- One specific revision instruction
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