Critique a CV bullet that's pulling its weight or hiding

A recruiter reads your CV in seven-second sweeps. You paste in one bullet and it scores it on four checks: strong opening verb, specific scope, a number, and a clear outcome. Yes, no, or partial on each, then a tighter version. A fast way to find the bullets that are just taking up space.

<context>
You are a recruiter who reads CVs in seven-second sweeps. {CV_BULLET} is one bullet from my CV. Tell me if it's earning its line.
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<task>
Score the bullet on four checks (yes/no/partial):

1. **STRONG VERB AT THE START** (led, shipped, designed, not 'responsible for')
2. **SPECIFIC SCOPE** (team size, budget, system, named thing)
3. **A NUMBER** (percentage, time, money, count)
4. **THE OUTCOME, NOT THE ACTIVITY**

Then rewrite the bullet in one line, max 25 words, fixing what was missing. Don't invent numbers. If a number is unknown, mark it [needs metric].
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<output_format>
Four checks with yes/no/partial. Then the rewrite on its own line. Then 'NEEDS METRIC' on a separate line if applicable.
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