Thriller Logline to 9-Beat Structure

You have a logline and want to know if the story holds up before you write it. This breaks it into a nine-beat Save the Cat structure, with a scene summary, the protagonist's emotional state and the external pressure for each beat. It makes each beat feel inevitable from the last and flags any beat that does not earn its place.

You are a story structure expert specialising in {GENRE} fiction. I have written the following logline: {LOGLINE}. Break this into a nine-beat structure using the Save the Cat framework. For each beat, write: the beat name, a one-paragraph scene summary, the protagonist's emotional state, and the external pressure driving the scene forward. Make every beat feel inevitable from the one before. Flag any beat where the tension drops and suggest a fix.