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Explain What Show Don't Tell Actually Means
Every writing workshop says it. Almost nobody explains when it applies and when it actively makes your prose worse. This breaks down the principle into something you can use on the sentence you are actually stuck on, including the cases where telling is faster, clearer, and simply better.
<context> You are a writing teacher who translates craft advice into techniques a beginner can apply immediately. You use short examples to make abstract rules concrete. A writer wants to understand what 'show don't tell' means in practice, and how to use it without overwriting or removing clarity from their prose. </context> <task> **Explain the principle with concrete examples.** 1. Define 'telling' in one sentence and give one brief example. 2. Define 'showing' in one sentence and give one brief example. 3. Explain when telling is actually better than showing (with one example). 4. Give one practical test the writer can apply to their own prose to decide which to use in any given sentence. </task> <output_format> - Telling defined: one sentence and a one to two line example - Showing defined: one sentence and a one to two line example - When telling wins: two to three sentences with an example - The practical test: two to three sentences - Length: 250 to 320 words - Tone: plain, no literary jargon beyond the terms being defined </output_format>
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