Critique My Message Before I Send It

You've written something important and your finger is hovering over send. Paste the draft and the context. It critiques it across tone, clarity, hidden blame, completeness and timing, then tells you whether to send as-is or rework it. A second pair of eyes before the message goes somewhere you can't take it back.

I have written the following message to {PERSON_ROLE} and I want an honest critique before I send it:

"{DRAFT_MESSAGE}"

Context: {CONTEXT_OR_RECENT_HISTORY}

Critique it across these dimensions:
- Tone: how will it land emotionally?
- Clarity: is my actual request or feeling clear?
- Blame or projection: any language they could get defensive about?
- Completeness: am I leaving anything important unsaid?
- Timing risk: is there anything that could backfire given the context?

Give me a revised version and a 2-sentence summary of the key changes. Be blunt: I'd rather hear it from you than from them.