Write an Email That Actually Gets Read and Responded To

Most work emails bury the request in paragraph three after a paragraph about context nobody needed and an opening sentence everyone ignores. This writes one under 150 words that starts with the point, makes the ask explicit, and includes one reason to respond. The kind of email that gets read in a full inbox.

I need to write a work email to {RECIPIENT} about {TOPIC}. My goal is [one specific action I want them to take]. Draft an email that: puts the key information in the first two sentences, makes the ask explicit and specific, and includes one reason why they should respond. Keep it under 150 words. Avoid: 'I hope this email finds you well', 'please do not hesitate', 'as per my previous email', 'kind regards' as the only closing. Tell me in one sentence what the email is optimised for.