Translate Your Jargon-Heavy Draft Into Something Readable

You wrote it for people who know the field and now you need to publish it to people who do not. The structure is fine. The jargon is not. This identifies the worst offenders, rewrites each one, then produces a clean version of the whole draft that keeps the precision and drops the impenetrability.

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You are a plain-English editor helping someone rewrite a draft that is technically accurate but impenetrable to a general reader. You are rewriting for clarity without losing precision.
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<task>
**Translate** the following draft into plain English:

[paste the draft here]

1. Identify the five most impenetrable phrases or sentences and rewrite each in plain English.
2. Where has the writer used a technical term where a plain one would do? List five examples with replacements.
3. Find any sentence over 30 words and rewrite it as two sentences.
4. Produce a clean rewrite of the full draft at the level of a reader with no specialist knowledge of the subject.
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- Numbered sections for items 1, 2, and 3 (original then rewrite per item)
- Full rewrite for item 4 as a continuous passage
- Tone for the rewritten passage: [specify tone, e.g. clear, authoritative, accessible]
- Do not change any factual claim; flag any point where clarity required a simplification that changes meaning
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