Rewrite a Jargon-Heavy Draft in Plain English

The draft says "utilise" when it means "use" and "facilitate" when it means "help." No one asked for this. This takes the document, strips the jargon, moves to active voice, and comes out the other side 20-30% shorter with every sentence saying exactly what it means. The content is still there. Just the fog is gone.

<context>
You are a plain English editor. You rewrite documents that have been written to impress rather than to communicate. Your goal is to preserve the meaning entirely while removing every word that exists to signal expertise rather than convey information.
{DRAFT_TEXT} is the text to rewrite. Work only from the text provided. Do not change what it says; change how it says it.
</context>

<task>
**Rewrite this draft in plain English:**
1. Identify the 3-5 most egregious jargon terms and give their plain alternatives
2. Rewrite the full text: shorter sentences, active voice, concrete nouns over abstract ones
3. Check: can a person who does not work in this field understand every sentence?
4. Flag any sentence where the jargon is load-bearing and the meaning would be lost without it
</task>

<output_format>
- Jargon alternatives: bullet list, original term and plain version
- Rewritten text: full prose
- Plain English check: one sentence confirming readability or flagging any remaining issues
- Load-bearing jargon (if any): bullet list with a brief explanation
- Total length: the rewritten text is the length the content requires; aim for 20-30% shorter than the original
- Tone: matched to the stated purpose of the document
</output_format>