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Compare Your Writing Voice Across Two Drafts
You have rewritten the same passage more than once and lost track of which version has your actual voice in it. This compares the two on rhythm, word choice, and how much they trust the reader, then tells you what is worth keeping from each. Good for writers deep enough into revision to be comparing their own drafts against each other.
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You have written the same scene or passage twice, at different times: Draft One is {DRAFT_ONE} and Draft Two is {DRAFT_TWO}. You want to know which version sounds more like you and why.
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<task>
**Compare the two drafts on voice, not just quality:**
1. Identify the sentence rhythm of each (short and clipped, or long and layered)
2. Note where each draft reaches for a bigger word than it needs
3. Note which draft trusts the reader more, and where
4. State which draft is closer to a consistent, recognisable voice
5. Recommend which elements from each draft to keep in a merged version
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- A comparison across the four points above
- A short final recommendation on what to keep from each
</output_format> ⚠ human-in-the-loop: you are responsible for the results of using this prompt, not us.