Critique An Instagram Carousel Script Before You Design It

You have written the words for a carousel post and are about to send it off to be designed, but suspect the first slide gives too much away or the ending just fizzles out. This checks each slide for pacing, standalone strength, and whether the last one actually asks for anything, then gives a straight verdict on whether it is ready. Good for anyone writing carousel copy before the design stage.

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You have written the text for an Instagram carousel post, slide by slide: {CAROUSEL_TEXT}. Before handing it to design, you want a critique of the writing itself.
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**Critique the carousel script:**
1. Check the first slide: does it earn a swipe, or does it give away the whole point too early
2. Check pacing across slides: is there a slide that could be cut without losing the argument
3. Check whether each slide can stand alone as a sentence someone might screenshot
4. Check the final slide: does it give a clear next action or does it just stop
5. Give one overall verdict: ready to design, or needs another pass, with the main reason
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- Feedback per slide, brief, numbered to match the original
- One overall verdict at the end
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