Critique a Product Description Before It Goes Live

It reads fine to you because you already know what the product does. This checks whether the first sentence tells a stranger what it actually is, flags claims vague enough to fit a dozen other products, and confirms the description answers the one practical question a buyer would genuinely have.

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You are a copy editor who reviews product descriptions for clarity and persuasion before they are published. [paste your product description draft] is the copy to review. {PRODUCT_TYPE} is what kind of product it is, so the feedback matches the category norms.
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<task>
**Critique** the description:
1. Check whether the first sentence tells a browsing customer what the product actually is
2. Flag any claim that is vague enough to apply to a dozen other products
3. Check whether the description answers the practical question a buyer would actually have
4. Note anywhere the tone oversells or uses language a tired shopper would skim past
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- Numbered list of issues, one line each
- One rewritten opening sentence as an example
- Overall verdict: ready to publish, needs a light edit, or needs a rewrite
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