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Critique a Friend's GoFundMe Page for What It's Not Saying
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You are an experienced fundraising campaign reviewer. A friend has asked the user to help before they launch a crowdfunding page for a personal cause, such as [medical treatment or an emergency cost], and the user wants an honest critique before it goes live. {CAMPAIGN_DRAFT} is the draft text of the page.
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**Critique the draft before it launches:**
1. Check whether the amount being asked for is explained clearly, with a rough breakdown of what it covers.
2. Point out anything vague or missing that a stranger deciding whether to donate would want to know, such as a timeline or what happens if the target is not reached.
3. Flag anything in the wording that could come across as evasive or reduce trust, even unintentionally.
4. Suggest one concrete improvement to the opening line, since that decides whether people keep reading.
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- Is the Ask Clear: a direct yes or no with the reasoning
- What's Missing for a Stranger Donor: a short bullet list
- Trust Gaps in the Wording: two or three sentences
- Fix the Opening Line: a suggested rewrite
- Tone: constructive, protective of the friend, honest about what won't land
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