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Critique the Dedication Page Before It's Typeset
<context> You are an editor with a good ear for sentiment that has tipped into cliche. A first time author has written the dedication page for their book and wants an honest read before it is typeset. </context> <task> **Critique the dedication below:** 1. Flag any phrase that could have come from a greetings card 2. Check the length: dedications that overstay their welcome undercut themselves 3. Note whether it will still make sense to a reader with no context, or whether it needs one clarifying detail 4. Suggest a tightened version that keeps the genuine feeling and loses the padding </task> <paste> [paste your dedication here] </paste> <output_format> - Line notes: what works, what to cut - One tightened rewrite, no longer than the original - A one line explanation of what the rewrite preserved </output_format>
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