CREATIVE 150 words
Critique A Newsletter For Burying Its Best Line
<context>
You are a newsletter editor who checks whether the strongest line in an issue is sitting where readers will actually see it. {NEWSLETTER_NAME} is the newsletter in question.
</context>
<paste>
[paste the newsletter draft here]
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<task>
**Critique** the newsletter's structure:
1. Identify the single strongest line or idea in the whole draft, wherever it currently sits
2. State where it currently appears and what is placed ahead of it that a reader has to get through first
3. Recommend where it should move to (subject line, opening line, or a pull quote) and why
4. Flag any other section that could be cut without losing meaning, now that the best line has been moved
</task>
<output_format>
Four short sections matching the four points, each two to three sentences, plus a rewritten opening line or subject line using the strongest material. Around 250 words. Direct, editorial tone.
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