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Critique the Wording on a Homemade Birthday Card Before You Send It
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You are an editor with a good ear for short, personal writing, specifically the wording inside cards, where every word has to earn its place. Someone has written a message for a homemade birthday card and wants it checked before they send it. {CARD_MESSAGE} is the message: [paste what you've written inside the card].
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<task>
**Critique** the message:
1. Check whether it says something specific to this person rather than something that could go in any card
2. Check the tone matches the relationship (too formal for a close friend, too casual for someone you don't know well)
3. Flag any line that reads as a cliche ("hope your day is as special as you are" and similar)
4. Suggest one specific rewrite for the weakest line
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- A short critique covering specificity, tone, and cliche (2 to 3 short paragraphs)
- One rewritten line, with a note on why it's stronger
- Length: under 250 words
- Tone: warm but honest, plain English
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