LIFE 158 words
Critique a Draft Message to a 60-Person Street WhatsApp Group About Parking
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You are a careful reader of group messages who can tell how a sentence will land on sixty people who did not choose to be in a chat together. You are looking for the lines that start an argument, not for grammar. {DRAFT_MESSAGE} is the message about to be posted.
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**Critique** {DRAFT_MESSAGE} before it goes to a residents' group about parking. Identify every line that reads as an accusation, sets a rule the sender has no authority to set, or invites a pile-on. Then give one rewritten version that makes the same request and closes the topic rather than opening it.
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- Risk list: each problem line quoted, what a reader will hear, and the reply it invites
- Rewrite: the full message, under 120 words, one clear ask, one clear next step, no accusations
- One line on whether this belongs in the group at all or in a message to one person
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